Harry Potter - Bellatrix/Lily - Perfection

[killing_kurare]

Title: Perfection
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Bellatrix/Lily
Word Count: 193
Rating: PG
Warning: character death
Challenge/Prompt: femslash100, challenge 468: elation
Challenge/Prompt: fluffyfrolicker ficathon, prompt: She has never been prettier, as now she's lying there dying on the floor for irrlichtertanz
Challenge/Prompt: 100_women - obsession






Bellatrix sinks to her knees, an elated smile on her face, a manic glint in her eyes. Her fingers are shaking as she reaches out to touch that beautiful thing on the floor.

She has never seen anything this perfect.

Silken hair red as blood frames a perfect face, as pale as it has never been.

Emerald eyes, wide open, never to be closed again.

Full, voluptuous lips parted in a never fading sigh.

After a moment that seemed to last forever Bellatrix dares to touch this lifeless goddess, feels a coldness that at last matches the ice in her own heart.

Finally there is no warmth to spoil her, no chance for time to ever destroy this angel that had walked tainted earth, lead astray by the abominations around her.

Finally this beauty is as pure and clean as the flower she was named after, and Bellatrix can’t hold back the tears of joy as she realizes this is true, that Lily can finally belong to her, and only her.

And Merlin was it worth the wait, for she has never been prettier as now she’s lying there dead on the floor.

Comments

[vitiate-me.livejournal.com]

So dark. So perfect.

This was great.

[killing-kurare.livejournal.com]

Thank you <3

[irrlichtertanz.livejournal.com]

Oh my god! I love you! I really, really love you!!
To be honest, I actually thought about Bellatrix, when I posted this prompt, but I didn't want to give such a strong frame. I wanted it to be used for whatever would come from imagination, by reading this prompt.

And you come along and write about Bellatrix!! I mean, could you read my mind or something like that?! <3 <3 <3

Oh and this is so great and ... for me, it's just pure perfection!

"She has never seen anything this perfect.
Silken hair red as blood frames a perfect face, as pale as it has never been.
Emerald eyes, wide open, never to be closed again.
Full, voluptuous lips parted in a never fading sigh."

These metaphers you used are so, so wonderful and dark and so like Bellatrix.

And the ending, uh, fantastic! It's exactly what I hoped for!

Thanks, for this amazing fill of my prompt!

A lot of love and a big thank you to you.

Kate <3

[killing-kurare.livejournal.com]

Haha, I love you too :-****
Hun, you DID prompt the pair Bellatrix/Lily :'D That's how I came up with it, and that is what gave me enough inspiration do fill the prompt :D
Because I feel the same way about this, Bellatrix fits these lines perfectly *-*
And it was so much fun to write it!!

I am sooooo gladyou like it :D Thanks for these kind words, they make me really happy <3 <3 <3

[irrlichtertanz.livejournal.com]

Gott bin ich blöd! >.<
Now you can see, how insane I am. :D
I totally forgot that I PROMPTED them both.

But anyway, I really do love this little piece of art!

Thank you so much for writing this!! <3 <3 <3

[swan-secrets.livejournal.com]

Your writing is so pretty in this, it goes so well with the darkness of it. Such a fantastic, twisted look at Bellatrix. Bravo!

[killing-kurare.livejournal.com]

Thank you :D I really love Bellatrix as a character, and this prompt literally screamed at me <3
Glad you like it!!

[salmon-pink.livejournal.com]

God, this is so perfectly twisted and uncomfortable and poetic and incredible! ♥

[killing-kurare.livejournal.com]

Thank you!! So glad you like it :D I really loved that prompt <3