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2015-02-01 11:31 pm (UTC)
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"The clock strikes midnight" - Is so intense and dark. You did a magnificent job building up the tension
"Over Thinking" Is a great contrast, light and airy, like flying should be. Lovely idea and imagery.
"Special chocolate" - This is kind of dark when you think about it, and adds more to the reasons why Petunia hates magic so much.
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"Over Thinking" Is a great contrast, light and airy, like flying should be. Lovely idea and imagery.
"Special chocolate" - This is kind of dark when you think about it, and adds more to the reasons why Petunia hates magic so much.